So…readers have decided to sit down and go to a quality archive full of some really well written, really hot, stories online. They get comfortable, open their laptops, head on over to GayAuthors.org because we’ve obviously got the best game in town when it comes to this sort of thing, hehehe…and BAM! They’re looking at hundreds upon hundreds of stories all at once. Whether readers feel overwhelmed by that, or they take the happy ‘kid in a candy store’ approach, it can be a daunting task to figure out where to begin. Tags and keywords help to narrow things down, sure, but your story might still be thrown onto a list with a hundred others with a similar theme. So the question is, how do you get readers to buy your particular doggie in the window over somebody else’s?
Welcome to this week’s topic! We’re talking about writing a story synopsis for your project, and hopefully grabbing the reader’s attention before they’ve even read a single sentence of your work.
However, before getting to that, I think authors need to remember that you really can’t judge a book by its cover…but the same can’t be said about a title. So the rules of a good story title definitely apply. Otherwise, readers won’t even get to the story synopsis and they’ll end up missing out on your genius. So always try to think of something that’s intriguing, easy to remember, and is relevant to the plot but doesn’t give too much away, when you’re giving your story a title. If it’s too simple and non descriptive (Like “Jake Gets A Blowjob”), readers might skip right over it. if it’s too long and unnecessarily descriptive (Like “The Cosmic Adventures Of Johnny The Detective On The Gangster Planet Of Neptune”)…yeah, skip. There’s a huge middle ground in between the two extremes, so you’ve got tons of creative space, just remember that title is the bait on your end of the fishing hook. That doesn’t mean the hook can’t be successful at catching fish…but most fish are going to pass up the chance to just suck on a random hook. Hehehe! So keep that in mind.
I like to think of story blurbs as being mini movie trailers for the story to follow. You’re giving readers a ‘hint’ about what to expect, but you want to leave out enough detail and context to keep them from figuring out the whole story from the blurb alone. Never underestimate a reader’s ability to guess his or her way through your entire story from the synopsis you’ve given them. As I’ve said in the past…readers are very savvy these days. They’ve read hundreds, maybe thousands, of stories before they got to yours. They know the themes. They know what ‘beats’ a story hits, how narratives work, how plot twists are foreshadowed early on. They know romantic tropes, science fiction cliches, horror contrivances, and dramatic cues. Keep this in mind when you’re trying to put a story blurb together. One or two sentences can end up giving away the entire plot of your story. And…even if the reader is making the wrong assumption from what they’ve read…they may skip your story anyway. Simply because they THINK, “I’ve read this before. I know how it ends.”
It’s nearly impossible to avoid, but it is a factor. Think of it as reading an old mystery and assuming ‘the butler did it’. That may not be how the story ends at all, but if your story blurb describes a murder, a grieving widow, and the victim’s only friend was his loyal and true butler, Edmund? Some people will think, “Yeah. That guy’s SO guilty! Hehehe!”
I think story synopsis blocks should serve one, very important, purpose. It’s asking your audience a question. Better yet, it is planting the seeds necessary to get them to ask the question. What is this story about? What can I look forward to? What kind of feeling am I going to get from this? Can I relate to these characters? Will I have any emotional connection to the plot? Etc.
Your answer, as a writer, should be…
…Read it and find out!
Your story blurb should take on the easy task of drawing someone in to read something that they’ve already been searching for. Always remember that they are trying to find your work and hear what you have to say. You’ve just got to wave your hands and shout out, “Over here!”And they’ll come running. So, whether your story is finished or a work in progress, try to see if you can capture the overall theme of the project as a whole. Ask yourself what ‘kind’ of story it is, and try to project that feeling in your synopsis. It’s like a micro fiction project of its own. You only have a paragraph to do everything that you hope to accomplish with 10 to 20 chapters of a short novel, so use the same rules that you would when writing your story. Interesting characters, intriguing plot, emotional involvement. If you’re writing an apocalyptic stories where the stakes are high, use a vocabulary and a put forth a vibe of possible danger and dire circumstances. If you’re writing a tragedy, your tone should be more somber. Feel free to pull a few heart strings when giving readers a glimpse of what’s to come. No matter what genre you’re writing in, push that ‘feeling’ forward in your synopsis. Grand adventure, or sweeping romance, or spine-chilling horror…give your synopsis that will match the story you want them to dive into. You can’t go wrong.
Now, that sounds like a lot to accomplish in a very small space, but it can be done. Just remember, this is a ‘movie trailer’ for your story, not the story itself. You only need to capture the appropriate emotion and basic idea of what’s going on. It’s ok to be vague. Again, you want readers to leave your story blurb with more questions than answers. Be careful not to ramble. I know what it’s like to want to cram a bunch of complex info into a few paragraphs to really sell your idea, but it might end up hurting you in the end. Even if you’re telling a story that covers a bunch of different genres and has a lot of twists and turns…DON’T try to squeeze all of that into your synopsis! “And then the archaeologist finds the magic medallion, but the medallion is not what it appears to be, and when the aliens show up, it’s up to Frank to save the love of his life from their evil plot to steal the world’s supply of a mysterious mineral that was buried in the Earth over a thousand years ago. Did I mention that Frank’s father was a Van Helsing?” Ok…stop. Take a breath. Erase ALL of that…and start over! Hehehe!
There’s WAY too much going on in that mess. A story blurb only has to be a summary. Instead, try, “On an archaeological dig, Frank finds a mysterious medallion that seems to be of interest to a group of hunters that lie in the shadows. Who are they? What do they want? And can Frank keep his love safe when they come looking for them?” There. Done. As always, your planting the seeds of multiple questions in the minds of potential readers. What mysterious medallion? What’s so important about it? Shadowy figures? Are they dangerous? What’s going to happen next?
And…your writer’s answer is? Say it with me…
‘Read it and find out!’
Don’t worry about being too specific with details. You got the ‘feeling’ right. Mystery, intrigue, a touch of romance…done. Assume that the readers who are interested will read the story and discover the rest on their own. Hey, more surprises for them to find, right? That can only help you in the long run. As they say, sometimes less is more.
Anyway, I’m sure that there is a LOT more that I could say about writing story blurbs, but I’ll avoid that rabbit hole for now! Hehehe! It might be better for a group discussion, anyway. Still, I hope this helps. Just remember…the ‘question’ is everything when grabbing a reader’s attention. If you can get that part right, it’ll gnaw on their brain until they surrender to it and give your story a try. You guys are on your own from there! Hehehe!
Best of luck to you all! And I’ll seezya soon with more writing tips for the future! 🙂